very nice. ^___^

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"Sit your ass down and drink your damn tea!!"
--Cid, FFVII

"Go ahead, indulge in your freakish masturbation! It's all you're good at!"
--At chan, Paprika

That was awesome! ^^ Wish I could write poetry that well *sigh* Ah, well, I'm more of a story writer anyway ^^

That actually came off the top of my head.

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For some reason you make me make me wish I wasn't a member of the human race.
: D

That's where the best of writings come from (in my opinion) ^_^ A lot of the times when I'm thinking but just so zoned out at the same time, my best writings just flow out of my fingers *grin*

Btw, I just love re-reading your poem, it makes me feel like I'm right in the thick of it all; caught up in all the crap that life holds for us *sigh*

It kind of reminds me of this book I just read called 'America' by E.R.Frank(you should check it out, its a good read); It's about this kid (America) who's sexually abused at a really young age, his mom is abusive but he can't leave his house; eventually he goes through a bunch of foster homes and ends up at some care home thing talking with this therapist who he's really relucant to talk to because through his whole life everytime he got close to someone they would leave. 's a touching story, amazing, really. (I'm just really crap at sumarizing (sp?) so it probably sounds like a horrible book ><;

anway, once again, awesome poem! ^___^